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German Gonzalez

English 1320/1301.161
Tphan Phan
September 10, 2010

Various Revision strategies are used between student writers and experienced ones. Each has different names but share the same meaning. They’re known as deletion, substitution, addition, and reordering. The definition of revision Is a rewording activity, students use different slang to represent proper terms .The students also shared they’re view on writing essays, and that’s repetition, students seem to repeat words or phrases in a different way.  These changes made are lexical changes but not semantics. The students use the word inspiration as a way of knowing how much their essay needs to be revised. More experienced writers describe their revision as a recurring process, a process of significant activities with different aspects of attention and different key points for each process. The writers seek to create meaning in the engagement with the writing in revising they’re work. They write several drafts and understand the flow of their essay matters, as well as the way they’re approaching the audience, which is also known as; form, balance, rhythm, and communication. Revision strategies help balance the choices of what should be written. The writer needs to rely on his or her own sense of what they’re writing and what should be written.